something i wrote one night
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something i wrote one night
not sure it came out as smooth as i'd like, but this was exactly what i was feeling and exactly what my life is like lately, praise God...
Spontaneous combustion?
no.
It's just that -
I cant
contain
the excitement
within me!
Although, I do
feel as though I could explode at any moment;
Although, I do
feel something awakening in me at a rapid pace;
Although, I do
feel as though whatever is moving within me could be
potentially dangerous.
Whatever it is,
I know for certain its You.
and -
I'm
not
afraid.
Spontaneous combustion?
no.
It's just that -
I cant
contain
the excitement
within me!
Although, I do
feel as though I could explode at any moment;
Although, I do
feel something awakening in me at a rapid pace;
Although, I do
feel as though whatever is moving within me could be
potentially dangerous.
Whatever it is,
I know for certain its You.
and -
I'm
not
afraid.
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Re: something i wrote one night
I love you...
The end.
The end.
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Re: something i wrote one night
yayyyyyyy! thanksssssss!
now, i don't want ya to feel like i'm puttin any sort of pressure on you, scott, but why havent i seen any of your stuff recently? really, man, the world could really benefit from some more deudbus musings...
now, i don't want ya to feel like i'm puttin any sort of pressure on you, scott, but why havent i seen any of your stuff recently? really, man, the world could really benefit from some more deudbus musings...
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Re: something i wrote one night
Haha, I haven't been writing much lately. I have a few things, but I dunno if they are worthy of posting yet.
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